Your speech thesis should differ from your paper by:
For example:
Paper: Because of poor urban schools in New York lacking resources, these students experience little success.
Speech: Due to low income urban schools in New York lacking resources, which hinders the success of students in education and their futures, we should help by providing work/study programs, more scholarships, and hiring creative teachers who have successful experience in low income schools.
- Recognizing your subject as already successful and addressing a way we can continue to help them prosper.
- Recognizing your subject as unsuccessful, but proposing ways we can help them become successful.
For example:
Paper: Because of poor urban schools in New York lacking resources, these students experience little success.
Speech: Due to low income urban schools in New York lacking resources, which hinders the success of students in education and their futures, we should help by providing work/study programs, more scholarships, and hiring creative teachers who have successful experience in low income schools.